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Just received the best critique from my instructor for the five pages I wrote in the last assignment for a class I’m in about novel writing.
“Wow! Awesome pages. Very little I would change. Great sense of POV, forwarding plot and characterization. Your dialogue simply shines here.
I can’t wait for more.”
There were two changes she made, simply to better identify who was performing a particular action outside the dialogue. Nothing else.